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On to the review!
Mr Young has asked that I review a series of short stories called Unspoken Stories. In short, I really enjoyed them all. There are five different stories in the collection. They're sort of a quasi-sci-fi genre and all very good reads. Give yourself about 40 minutes for each. Longer for some, shorter for others. I read them all in a short afternoon while camping. I'm not a huge fan of the iPad but I do like the iBook app.
Below is a brief review of the stories and some questions I asked the Author.
- Unspoken Stories
- Josie Dorri And The Coffee Ban (June 22, 2011)
- Great story. Funny, serious and yet intriguing it should be the reason to buy this series.
- What was the inspiration for Josie Dorri and the Coffee Ban?
- Josie Dorri And The Coffee Ban was inspired by my brother-in-law. He said I should write a short story about someone not having their coffee for the day and all the bad things that would happen as a result. I thought about the idea and came up with using a coffee prohibition that the government institutes, and I added a little twist in there as to why things go wrong. Even though the story has a humorous tone, it does have an underlying theme about addiction and how it effects us personally and others.
- The Present (May 9, 2011)
- It's got you jumpin' all over the place...but you'll find your way back. It's sort of the "gift that keeps on giving" kind of story; I found my self pondering this one long after I read it.
- Running To Keep Her (July 6, 2011)
- Touching and challenging it's an interesting story.
- Copy Bird (March 7, 2011)
- I really liked this story. I wanted it to go further as well...to develop the two human characters further and to explore the relationship of the bird.
- Copy Bird is based in a post-apocalyptic world. Will you be writing anything further in this genre?
- I liked that setting because it fit well into my story I came up with. On several occasions people have asked me if I plan to expand on that story. I might just do that. I find when I write stories that there is back story I come up with that never gets written. Sometimes I allude to the back story. While I don't have any plans to revisit a setting like that, I definitely can't rule it out, especially since there are a lot of stories I could tell with it.
- Going Home (March 18, 2011)
- This is the only story that I thought a bit predictable. However, it's a good short story that will catch you if you're not careful.
- Going Home seemed like a very personal story. Is there a connection with your own life that you'd be willing to share with readers?
- It's a personal story in the sense that we have all lost loved ones. We often remember the last thing we said to them, and sometimes we regret it. Other times though, it might become something that we live our life by and it defines us. I came up with the idea from a flash fiction story I wrote on my blog. The story is called Home, and the picture for inspiration of it showed a porch swing, which is where the ending scene came from. It was only about 100 words or so, but I liked it so much, I decided to expand on it by writing a short story.
- Will any of these stories be used to "seed" a full novel?
- Unfortunately, none of these stories will become part of a novel. At the most, especially with Copy Bird and The Present, I might have sequel short stories I'll write for them. Overall, the tales are written to be short, to the point, and read in one sitting.
Want a copy? The author graciously offered a free copy. The first request for the book in the comments will get the code, just be sure I've got your email address. otherwise, it's only $2.99 on Smashwords.

